Your written style is very good Rashaan, the article is a little short and including a conclusion or your own opinion would have been a good idea. In terms of the layout, you have considered some conventions such as columns, colours, title and images. I think looking at case studies will help you consider placement of images better, also fonts and sizes and maybe including pull quotes or descriptions by your images. Overall though, a good first piece of journalism. Amy
Your written style is very good Rashaan, the article is a little short and including a conclusion or your own opinion would have been a good idea. In terms of the layout, you have considered some conventions such as columns, colours, title and images. I think looking at case studies will help you consider placement of images better, also fonts and sizes and maybe including pull quotes or descriptions by your images. Overall though, a good first piece of journalism.
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